A Revised Paragraph (The Mage of Appleberry). Gallery A Revised Paragraph (The Mage of Appleberry). Appleberry, Books, Creative Writing, Creative Writing Exercises A Revised Paragraph (The Mage of Appleberry). Written below are two paragraphs. The first of which is [...] By Chris J Mitchell|2019-04-05T12:13:17+00:00March 26th, 2019|Appleberry, Books, Creative Writing, Creative Writing Exercises|0 Comments Read More