Creative Writing Exercise 3 – The Mountain
Below is another example of – show, don’t tell. I find doing these specific writing exercises very enjoyable, but don’t worry as I will endeavour not to fill my blog with show, don’t tell posts!
- The path led up the hill and in the distance stood the mountains.
- There was something strange about the path, for it didn’t quite seem real. As though something you would see in a dream and not whilst hiking through the country side. To add to this strange sight, a foreboding feeling was cast as it led to an unknown location set deep in the mountains.